Sleepless Nights.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Wednesday, 24-Jun-2009 6:11:30

Sleepless nights, searching in vain, longing for the perfect soul.
One that will hold me, never abuses or uses me, longing to be whole!
Wanting to be loved, longing to be kissed.
Wanting to be cherished, wanting to be missed.
Her voice is like an angel's, like a windchime in my ear.
Whenever she's gone, I want her here. Whenever she's far, I want her near.
I want her kisses against my skin.
I long to tell her how I feel within.
Her lips apon my chest, first quickly, then slow.
Teasing, yet passionate, I want her to know!
Shineing star, your light in this wasteland.
Before you set me free, my soul was broken and damned.
Oh, but will you see, my feelings for you are true?
They are not lies from most men's lips, I truly feel for you!
I beg of thee, hear my cry!
Thy heart's weaking and bleeding, heal me of thy pain, and make me fly!

Post 2 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Wednesday, 24-Jun-2009 8:17:42

very nice peace. thanks for sharing

Post 3 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Wednesday, 24-Jun-2009 17:16:35

Thanks! Tell others about this. I'd like others thoughts

Post 4 by pebbles (the key to flying is falling and missing the ground.) on Thursday, 25-Jun-2009 14:33:27

I liked it. it was very nice. smiles

Post 5 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Saturday, 27-Jun-2009 19:55:26

This is a nice piece you've written. This poem is filled with wistfulness.

Post 6 by Daenerys Targaryen (Enjoying Life) on Sunday, 28-Jun-2009 7:58:22

I really like this poem.

Post 7 by sacrificial angel (Generic Zoner) on Saturday, 03-Oct-2009 15:06:00

one of the best iI've heard lately. I don't say things like that lightly just for the hell of it.